Reflection

Today I worked well on my easttle and I am working well on my writing.

The sacrifice

One normal boring day in a normal street a boy called Edward and a boy called Bob went there favourite place laser zone. Edward dressed in his favourite cloths; He wore grey jeans, a green t-shirt, and black glasses. His friend wore a clown wig, black tuxedo, and black glasses. He looked “Men in black “but in clown form. Then the two boys got their gear on and a laser gun. They were both shooting each other until this dark weird looking hole came out from the ground.

 

 The dark hole sucked Bob in like a vacuum cleaner sucking in all the dirt from the floor. Edward jumped in after him. He was out cold for 1 hour. He then woke up lying next to old smelly human skulls. Edward could smell old human bones rotting slowly on the ground and howling, groaning and screaming in the distance. Seeing dead bodies piled on the ground like a hill of dead bodies. He was wondering where Bob could be.

 

 Bob was chained up to a slippery brick wall calling out for help any after about 10 minutes some answer his cry. But it wasn’t Edward. It was the king of all things dead the Devil. Back down the devils monstrous cave. Edward found a path that leads to the devil but then the human skulls started to roll all over the place and then suddenly a squirrel popped out from the pill of skulls and said, Find the enchanted wizard. The squirrel then ran away and then some think popped out it was the wizard. Edward said that was easy.

 

 The wizard gave him a sword to kill the devil. Back down the path the devil said sorry Bob but you are a sacrifice, Oh said bob. Just when bob was going to die Edward saved him and stabbed the devil. After he killed the devil Edward and his friend re-turned to the normal world both breathless on what just happened. Then they went home and pretended that nothing happened.     

Reflection

Today at school I started off well but after easttle I got silly and I didn't work well at all.

What I learnt today

what I learnt today.

What I achieved today?

I achieved on how to edit work properly.

 

How to do a good comment

1. No swearing

2.No spelling mistakes

3.No silly comments

How to post a good comment

1. Don't add swearing in the comment.

2. No spelling mistakes in the comments.

3. Make sure your comments makes sence.

Seans Mum

Hi

I have enjoyed reading the blog.Great fun.xxx

Bev (Seans mum )

Hi
I really enjoyed reading Seans blog and watching the interactive videos.
Bev.

I have moved my blog

My blog is on posterous its a pretty cool site.

Twilight
Begining. Edward and Bella meet.
Middle Bella likes Edward but edward doesnt like bella.
End. Edward and bella fall in love.

karati kid
Begining karati kid moves to japan.
Middle. He got beaten up by some boys.
End. Karati Kid enters a tordement and wins.

Cars
Begining. A car is fameous
Middle. He gets lost in a little ghost town
End. H e makes friends and he got to the race in time.

Once upon a time there was a monkey called Monkey. He was a special monkey. Monkey had weird coloured fur and an extremly long tail. Monkey had fashion sense because he wears black glasses all the time. Monkey lived in the jungle. In the jungle there was green trees with fat bushy leaves on top, with the smell of dirt from the ground and animal poo everywhere which stunk up the jungle. There were animals sceeching and sceaming everywhere. The noises were coming from parrots sceeching and girl momkeys sceaming. All that sceeching scared him.

Animoto

He could see green everywhere and huge, fat, bushy trees towering above him. Then the man realized he was in the bush. He was pechrafied and scared. Then the tall trees started to move left and right. After that all he heard was birds singing and cracking leaves and the distcusting muddy dirt on the ground.

How he's feeling
What sounds he could hear
What colours and what you would see there

smells

Sean's survival kit

12 Items I need

1. Sleeping bag
2. Food
3. Lots and lots of water
4. Marbals
5. A sharp knife with a built in composs and a built in matches
6. First aid kit
7. Camouflage clothing
8. Trampoline shoes
9. Choroform
10. A camouflarge tent
11. A solor powered torch
12. Fork